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Old 08-04-04, 01:10 PM   #14
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Voted For: RobKilla

killa got this ,ya came with alot more content dawg,i was'nt feeling your whole verse n saw a couple punches but you need ta get some decent wordplay in your battle.n try ta fix some of your structure a couple lines also dint ryme but overall you had punches n the better verse..
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