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Old 08-04-04, 04:47 PM   #18
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Banned: Biting
 
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This was feedback posted for Ruffridah187

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Man dat wasnt a great battle but my heres my opinion anyway...

Lekchur-
Dat was Ok but ya need to make your rhymes clearer by gettin your structure improved. But the actual punchlines were good