Sorry I wasnt finished. Anyway Lekchur I didnt get sum of thosepunchlines but it wasnt to bad.Oh, and lectures tend to be boring.

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Sum great punchlines and a tight structue made dat shit pretty dope. Gud peersonals as well and you did go by sum shit he said which was nice. One tiny flaw was only dat sum of the lines were a mouthful bybut dat wasnt much. Tight verse overall though homie.