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Old 08-04-04, 06:20 PM   #14
LyrikalGladiator
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Voted For: phatinum

phatinum - u cant talk about killing someone in a battle it does no good....ur flow was ight.....uhhh tha 4th line was wackness to full extent....work on dat....cas ur set up looked like it mwas goin somewheer but dint....and ur closer was simply horrible....work on ur structure too i couldnt find where ur rhymes were and shyt....keep droppin and elevate dogg

c-square - structure was waaaay ahead of phatinum's...no doubt u took that aspect.....flow was better.....rhymes were better.....u seemed more focused on disses rather than saying what ur gonna do to him.....i like your closer....it hit harder than phatinums did by far..

nice spit kid

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