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Old 08-04-04, 06:50 PM   #7
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ok state good drop alot of personals like the 3rd bar but your opener was super weak.9th and last line aint rhyme and your flow was good basically the same as mans flow.man good opener and good wordplay on the second bar.4th line was a hard hitting personal and 8th line 'biting ya verse'lol.so band wins with better punches and harder personals.
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Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja

oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?