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Old 08-04-04, 08:33 PM   #24
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ahh,both good drops,manipulation i liked your verse for the fluent imagry,some lines kinda threw me off like the were worded a bit wierd but your plot was koo..this is hard ta compare these 2 cause you both came with tottally different styles...flow your verse was nice but i was'nt feeling the continues break in the ryme plot when you'd explain the situation"the bold text"...i vote was determined ta who brought the story their life more..flow you had coo comparisons the whole verse threw like refering to the pope,n others...manip,you were brutally consistent in your imagery of topic...this was tough though...im gonna go with manipulation in this cause she expressed more emotion n had a consistent image throughout without explaining the situation or breaking away from a ryme scheme...props ta both mc's..nice job
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