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Old 08-04-04, 09:15 PM   #10
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Voted For: caliph

damn... this was some good shyt... both verses were good but i gotta go with caliph on this one... the imagery in his rhyme was on point... it kinda reminded me of the joint Common did (I Used To Love H.E.R.)... caliph's flow and structure was also a little better.

There were a few mis steps in forsaken's joint but the ideas were there and easy to catch on to... like when you rhymed multply and destiny... little things like that steals from your shine... there were a couple of lines that kinda confused me on first read but after re-reading it I got the point... good topical battle y'all but I gotta ride w/ Caliph
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