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Old 08-04-04, 09:18 PM   #11
Keith Moon
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Voted For: For$akeN

im voting for for$ake

Claiph-topical...wasnt that good didnt show emotion or anything not even a decent story....your sstructure and flow was off....but practice and eventually youll elevate

For-nice piece, nice vocab/structure.........okish flow....nice storyline......tells the true heart of hip-hop not gnagsters and stuff but lyricism....I also coaught a Don diss lol....

v/For$aken
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