Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

way better verse..flowand structure was good vocab killed the other verse this was the easiest topical win i've ever seen...nice verse you did it fairly well....bro:your verse was terrible i mean honestly did you even try or was this a gimme from da beginning...you need ta elevate on you written...n i think both of you could stop doing slashes//at the end of your sentences...it looks neater n makes the reader flow through the lines easier...

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