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New to RB
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IP:
^^^ thaz not true
this was a really good drop...it was kinda short but good
it was strong and got tha point across in very few lines
clever word combinations.....only thing wrong really was the ender
that should be ur hardest line...grab the reader and make him/her feel what u feel
but yeah i think u got tha right idea...keep it up
well u should return tha favor and gimme some feed back on my poems:
"you pain is my pain" and "turn for tha worse"
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