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Old 08-05-04, 12:07 PM   #6
Vango
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I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles,
We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles.
decent opener
But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try,
Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die,
ahh just okay
This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs,
And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com.
nice personal
With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile,
I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child.
not good
You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten,
Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten.
not a good closer






This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth
Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf
not good
Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended
You put your life into this battle
.................................. so its only fitting you should end it
nice punch

Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet
decent
I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal
Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal
okay
Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow
Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole
not good

close batte, i give this one to raw material based on better punches and personals. not your best stuff RM, com your verse was decent but not enough personals.

vote- raw material
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