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Old 08-05-04, 01:09 PM   #21
M&rk
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They call you Cinderella, cuz you guna need a miracle//
but me, i got more luck and charm then a box of cereal//
~~~yo this is witty, but not a punch, flip it into one and this woulda been a good punch. the rest of ya stuff i wasn't feelin at all really though.

now degreez
my rhymes are "ill", shit makes ya lose ya lunches-
claim to be "flex" but theres no muscle behind ya punches
~~~nice, good personal

and your two canada lines won this, the rest i didnt feel.

and if you aint got shit to blame, then blame canada-

but really i wanna be a fan of ya-
wait where you from...nevermind...canada
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