I'd vote but it'd be biased since Barz and me is cool and shyt so omma just drop some feedback:

Stripess writin verses at CHURCH....PRAYIN ta GOD to send you some hope.....
but PENSION is BROKE....cuz ya homies cant even AFFORD to LEND you a vote~

Weak opener... 2nd line threw me... what's pension got to do with anything?

Punches direct at ya throat...and like a REBELLIOUS CHILD u jus CANT STOP ME....
You just the OBJECT OF INFLICTION....like the JAPANESE at NAGASAKI~

Better bar but the first line was played and weak... good finish though... never heard that one before

The TOP 3.....cuz like O.J SIMPSON Ice already MADE THE CUT....
You aint a HEAVYWEIGHT RAPPER...cuz like stripes he just DONT WEIGH ENOUGH~

1st line=self-glorification and not feeling the 2nd line... played wording... lol@stripes don't weigh enough

The WEIGHT IS TOUGH....and like OPRAH WINFREYS WAISTLINE STRIPESs has LOST IT.....
This WIGGERS GETTIN HIS ASS KICKED....like DISSIN LARRY BIRD IN BOSTON~(

too many references to weight... Oprah lines are played...so is the Larry Bird line...

ICe Causin....UPSET STOMACHES like an OVERDOSE ON PRUNES....
Cuz my punches are TOO HOT....like wearin WINTER COATS IN JUNE~

Weakest line in ya verse... closer was played about 10 years ago... ok structure overall... build on ya vocab no real punches that stuck... personals were obsolete...

Icepick!? More like thumbtack or sewing needle/
You're rhymes are jacked and dead like dude who lived aboved the Reagle Beagle/

you my boy and all but this line was stretched all to hell...lol
i like the originality, though...good opener... just shorten it somehow to fit

See I speak reality throwing potent shots/
You speak fantasy like 900 #s and I robot/

good use of current events but no real punch

Step into the real world posing as Jason/
Wearing mask to hide lies behind the rhymes ur saying/

didn't like this one too much... I know you can come a lot better than that... stop playing around.

Patience? I have none but it's almost over/
This battle was a rocky horror like Dame losing Hova

good closer... originality gets points

Barz... in text it's all about the structure and how easy it is for others to read ya flow... stop thinking audio.. I know... that's what we're used to...but text is different.

It was an ok battle ... can't say who won... sorry!
*This was just to let you all know that me and my boy let each other know when we fuck up a verse... that's how we stay on top of our game. If dude woulda smoked him... trust me, I woulda said so...and vise versa... but... I can't vote on this!*