Voted For: J_Trooper
this was a tough battle ta judge so im jus gonna break it down:
j-trooper
Now you Overbearin My Lyrix~ ~i dont think your hearin This?
You wouldnt be Hard if u had help from Pornographic Stimulants
^^good opener..6/10 pushin the rhyme
it's Not in your Heritage for you 2 Be Respected,U kno This
Go thru u quicker than the Ring Transitions on Jennifer Lopez
^^ok..5/10
Im testin your Durability,U aint Ranked enough 2 Stand near Me
Fuck Canadians i Deliver "Backshots" Harder than wayne Gretsky
^^"backshots"did'nt like this thought it was lame 4/10
Consider Rejection its ya only Option, Ya rights i fuckin Own
Can tell your Artificial like ya lyrix were enjected wit Sillicone
^^o.k punch..badly worded..5/10
Understand your Battelin one Of Lyrical Viruses Leathal Tyrants
Your spitting is~~ Inconsistent like Michael Jordan Retirements
^^not a bad closer..lacked of punch though..6/10
overall did'nt really feel much in terms of punches from ya verse j,i've seen you produce much better stuff than this..
it was pretty weak..26/50
dustyblunt...
Dusty Blunted the lyrical phenomenon,Im about to fuck this cat up worse than hallucinogenics dispersed in Viet Nam,
^^stretch unequal lines..4/10
You packin’ a pistol? Well Im packin’ a bomb…
Get your whole crew torn down in a week like you were Saddam….
^^no punch filler..4/10
Im so dope you can see me is when I reflect at night when the ocean’s clam…(Like a Star)
Only time you get any play is with your fingers and your palm..
Because you’re a pervert jerkin off to porn of me and your mom….
^^bar wit 3 lines..nono wack..6/10
Your 14 and 1 but your soon to be 14 and 2…
Nice picture on your signature….I remember that…That’s me knockin’ the fuck outta you…
^^nice idea..ya ruined ity with ya 1st line..4/10
You vocab needs to check into your local illiteracy rehab…..
Your whole crew more “Yellow” than a taxi cab…..
ya battlin him,not the crew..weak punch..n closer..5/10
overall 23/50
overall your rhymin scheme was better but you structure plain sucked,keep elevatin.....
im gonna have ta go with j on this battle^^this explains it..
but this battle was'nt very good..no hate its jus my opinion..
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