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Old 08-05-04, 09:02 PM   #1
Oliver Twist
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Posts: 18
From: Far North.
Exclamation Oliver Twist Has Landed (PEEP)

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New to rapbattles.com....looks decent thus far. I'm mainly a battle addition but I can create impressive topicals! I'm just gunna key something up real quick instead of leaving a voice message..lol.

Head of my class...students with rhymes
intuitive minds, spittin' hell fire like lucifers time
Afraid to live 'cus we all assuming we dien'
It's like mc's lose half of self as soon as we sign
I'll stay high on my pedestol serving nuts like a stewerdess flyin
See the punchline?..I'm down for making dough like lunch time
but believe i'll take the last shot like T-Mac at crunch time
I'm a polished lyricists ya never seen such rust shine
Tylonel I crush mine
The product of intervenous drugs and corrupt minds
A must have like the news need photographers
that's about the equation that crews need Oliver
But all of ya.....don't wanna battle this top prospect
Is this keystyle still runnin' or do ya need a pause yet
five minutes..what it takes to deliver
a decent thought that causes goosebumps and makes ya shiver
A bigger ocean of talent haste lets praise the river
It's between raw and cooked believe me we can all taste the difference
New to the site infamous rap battles
I'm not ignorant..but fuck manners I'll smack adults
Swim up my creek..defeat is effortless if ya weak with cracked paddles
This is rap a thine line from poetry
My rhymes are holy like a thousand knives pokin' me
I'm potent with unleashed potentcy
A secret...naw ain't no hush in need
I've let it all out so this show must proceed.......


Just a quick key..and believe me that was quick..but I'm feelin it..as I do with most of my stuff...as i mentioned I'm more of a battle fiend but I thought who needs a resume...gimme five or ten and this is what the outcome is.....so peep it critic and get at me..I should be on for most of tonight!.......2
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