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Old 08-05-04, 09:10 PM   #8
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Voted For: BostonLyricist

Not breaking the lines down 2 x 2....no need..one sided battle

Boston-Good punches and personals, some ok wordplay..not really any multis that i noticed....structure was down until last few lines...nice flow...overall decent drop..ive seen better from you..but good

Helter-Momma jokes? played and weak concept...wack structure that messed with the flow, no good punches or personals...michael jackson? another played and weak concept...you fed off his whole verse...over all weak ass battle...elevate and take on newbs, they're the only ones you'll beat, sorry kid
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