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Old 08-06-04, 01:57 AM   #9
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Voted For: WiNC

Not breaking lines down...felt this was one sided

WiNC- I like your new style..a good opener..some stretched out lines...ok flow...good punches...ok wordplay....nice closer...overall decent drop

LyricalFlowz23-You said twice he couldnt rip you...you dont have to repeat what you said....weak punches...structure started off nice, then started stretchin after the first 6 lines...flow wasnt all that great...no good personals.....no good wordplay...you need to elevate man
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