Voted For: KroNuz
im gonna break it down...
SC
Sick Lines will make your eye sight blurry like it was the 4th of July
his boi said he wasn't gay..he replied, "Now That's A Damn Lie"
^^ok.punch....6/10
Claims his blessed lines are a "head" then i'll nail him in his Holy "temple"
Your lines are far from sickness..wack and Kronuz seem to resemble
^^good wordplay..i liked this..7/10
Why'd u capitalize da "N" in ur name? oh ya dats right, ur worth Nothing
dese bars'll put more black dots in ur structure then Chocolate chip muffins
^^nice setup,but i was'nt feelin the 2nd line..6/10
Kronuz is definitely not "straight", Just like his status...He's "off line"
Lines Blast naepalms-n-Molotolves, have u runnin, steppin on land mines
^^nice vocab..7/10
Kids got lotta balls to challenge me,Leave Kro-Nuz..With No-Nutz
Treat lines like a vaccum..stick it inside you...And Blow-Gutz
^^ok closer...7/10
state ya verse seemed kinda rushed did'nt have great personals or mad wordplay bout an average drop,still good..33/50
kronuz
If Ya Pic Was Ya Background Only Way I Fear Ya Verse
And when You Need The "Cross" Look In The Mirror First (His Pic)
^^nice personal,good opener..8/10
Ya Verse And Vomit Got Alot In Common They Both Vile
N He gotta Grill Like "Proof" Thats Why He Dont Smile
^^was'nt feelin this..filler..4/10
Im Grim, Ill Take The Win Easily,And You'll Die Just A Fake
And Him Beatin Me Is Like His Chances Of Both Eyes Looken Straight!
^^funny shit..good personal..7/10 pushed rhyme
This Dudes Not Nicer, In This Division His Rhymes Soft
And Ya "User Title" Like Ya "Vision" One "Eye" Off (HiS User Title And His Eye)
^^personal..8/10
Ill Be Fair N Honest, This Aint A Threat I Bare A Promise
State's Chances Agianst Me Are Like Him In A Staring Contest! (Peep His Pic)lol
^^good closer...7/10..pushed rhyme...overall..34/50
overall you had better personals but lost ground on your rhyme scheme,nice personal punches though,nice drop..
overall i had ta break this down n give it 2 kronuz cause of the personals it was close and was a pretty good battle, props ta both ,...please return the favour........
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