Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
shit ppl it aint hard da tell a record & name like mine had da attract dis quer // had da really think about battlin rite?? marvjay is dat nigga dat "atmos-fear"-
^^ nice wordplay-personal
might shyne but dat'z only when marv's done,i call her up n homie da broad come // even "cam" madd cuzz i stay with "pink" on me but umm datz only ya moms "tongue"-
^^filler,but still nice
but how can u say i aint sick as you??,on rv top 10 nobody eva mention's you // u not nice rv.com i dont know whut it is but dis "dick" only "cums" "(tip) ical"-
^^??was'nt feeling this bad rhyme
i think u should get banned n more if i aint da sickest on da site whut u panic 4? // like "nail shops" if u spit at a dude with "aids" trust me u would give da "man-a-cure"-
^^koo closer nice wordplay
If bein a vet means you hot then you should be put in a well...(line 1)
cuz you don't spit fire or flames, jst u thinkin u do is funny as hell...(line 2)
^^ok nothin special
Dis nigga, could spit? yo ppl dat you betta neva believe...(line 3)
So Marv be mah advil, don't spit for RV's very own relief...(line 4)
^^pushed rhyme,weak punch..
After hearin how bad u spit?shyt you'd might as well be put in shackles...(line 5)
The proof is ur record, (31-16) you only win one out of every two battles...(Line 6)
^^do your math again ..that don't add up
Shyt, so please leave, ur hated, we don't want you at all marvolous...(line 7)
If u were jesus n rhymin good would save our souls?---
shyt, cuz of you, the devil wouldn't be hard to trust...(line 8)
^^bad closer did'nt even rhyme...
marv took this cause of punches both had some probs in their verse but marv had the punches n flow overall...
atmos if he has a record of 31/16..hes had 47 battles ,so 1 outta 2 battles would put his wins at 23/24...i think you jus got confuzed....
return the favour /else i won't vote on ya battles anymore...
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