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Old 08-06-04, 06:25 AM   #9
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Voted For: Sinner

Sinner takes this battle. He had some good vocab and a good structure ta go with it. He got J on the punches too. Nice structure and flow. It really flowed nicely and appealed ta me as the reader. J came kinda weak. Elevate. Good structures on both sides but Sinner takes this.

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