Voted For: Sinner
Sinner takes this battle.  He had some good vocab and a good structure ta go with it.  He got J on the punches too.  Nice structure and flow.  It really flowed nicely and appealed ta me as the reader.  J came kinda weak.  Elevate.  Good structures on both sides but Sinner takes this.
Vote - Sinner
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