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Old 08-06-04, 07:26 AM   #9
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From: Reppin Da 3o4
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Voted For: dysphoria

Ok, again...not breaking down the lines, take much to long and no use for em...one sided battle

BrOTheRP.A.R.A.-weak...no vocab, no wordplay...stretched lines in your bottom half...ok flow...it could of been better if you made it longer with better vocabs..used some multis n metas, and had some wordplay...real weak "song"

dysphoria-Good Vocab, a couple of multis here and there, but nothing to special..your structure was stretched at times which messed with the flow, but a decent "song"...more original

Vote: Dysphoria
Reason:Came with better vocab, more multis and an overall better "song"
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