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Old 08-06-04, 08:51 AM   #27
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Voted For: RobKilla

x... ya first line was ya best and everything after that went limp compared to Rob's joint. That nissan line was the worst. Work on connecting ya punches to something that actually is supposed to be connected... most made no sense and seemed extremely filler.

Rob was on point with his lines and they connected well.... punches were a lot harder and he included a lot of personals... like the dustyblunted line and not being able to take the smoke... also liked the dirty laundry/ ALL line... good wordplay... rhymes were thought out better... he had a deadline and used it to his advantage...

v/robkilla
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