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Old 08-06-04, 09:04 AM   #4
Ca'lam
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From: Saint Louis
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this kids style is more hated, and outdated then what happened to jews..
. . . . . . he wonder why hes not known: then STOP battling "Who ?"s..
i'll break ya toe off, then smack you like i forgot to take my zoloft..
. . . . . . leave you puzzled and confused like your avatar.. so lost..(LMAO)
bash this has-been, put copper to this hoe, so now we cash-friends..
. . . . . . you had a nice battle run, 9-4,what the fuck happened??..
most people wise up,delete they screen name and stop rappin'..
. . . . . . but you insist on getting burnt to crust in pie fashion..
man watch as band's ass gets raped, ima make his damn casket-wake..
. . . . . . this kids a fake fruit, like a bowl of plastic dates..
this kids multis are wack shit, and won't help him like chapped lips..
. . . . . . ima tear his verse apart like blondes to black dicks..
he a herb like green trees, this cat ends up with ripped spleens..
. . . . . . even with a remote, and preview channel he wont see me..
hes a no show, his fur aint visable when site sees the fog..
. . . . . . ima silence his ribbits, like i put Bats to frogs..
give this kid a storm when i hit em wit drastic thunder..
. . . . . . leave ya bones in fragments kinda like his Spittin structure.. (he spits in paragraphs)
i'll put your life in a broken engine, to leave ya fate stalled..
. . . . . . empty ya jaws, cause we all know like pool tables you ate-balls..(eightball)

^flow is there..strucutre just fucked cause i did it in notepad lol.. .. uppin for ya verse