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Old 08-06-04, 09:05 AM   #21
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Voted For: RobKilla

RK... Good opener in the first bar...2nd bar was blah...the second line in ya third bar was off the chain... you should kept the whole verse like that!... 4th bar was ok but kinda simple... weak closer

goats... you had a lot of stretched lines... might sound good in audio but this is text...no real punches thrown here... second half of ya verse was based on self-glory... closer was weak... opener confused da hell outta me... and uh... roadie and voting don't really rhyme... it's kinda close but...no

vote/ r kelly... i mean robkilla...lol
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