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wordman hit harder but not by much...flow was stretched... a few lines could've been worded better for effect purposes... personals were better...closer was weak

BL... filler verse... dress like MRS Clause?!!! what's that got to do with anything?... good opener... everything fell off after that... work on structure, personals, punches... but stay gully with ya openers... why'd you diss ya own record?... ya bringing attention to yaself... don't do that!

vote/wordman