I appreciate stuff with substance (which u did not provide) but it was hot and u had some crazy metaphors. Good job (not like u need me to tell u that. But i'm new here. I'm a 16 year old poet and I love hip hop (rap is different but I wont get into that). I just posted my first poem on here and it's called "higher" read it 4 me and tell me what u think. Thanx alot
P.S- I respect and expect honesty