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Voted For: Ice Pick
No reason to break down lines
Ice Pick0Crappy Rhyme Scheme on your opener...but you had punches, which is more than i can say for fatlip32
fatlip32-You had no punches...no metas..no multis..no personals...structure was off at times and a messed up flow....you definitely need to elevate...noting your lack of punches, maybe you'd make a better topical battler
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