damn man, that's powerful. i think its good stuff. i'm new, but here's what i was thinkin. i like how u flow all through your verses, and i like the last verse too, but its def a different kinda flow. u don't rhyme at the end (it was love, i thought, we fought...), and it kinda threw me off at first, but i think it can show more power. sounds like u thought stuff out well, nice job.