alright the chorus needed jesus in its life and heres what i think i bout the verses:

first verse: lyrics were str8 but the way u said shit waz killin me
second verse:thiz verse needs more than jesus cuz it waz horrible on every tip cept the lyrics were just normal bad
third verse:i love the voice u got and the flow waz sick and the lyrics waz realt tight and did sound mainstream

but last of all the doubles yall waz doin waz WAY too loud and yall could work on that next time