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Old 08-06-04, 04:04 PM   #33
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Voted For: $ Wordman $

better punches but i dint like your 3 line closer,the last line could've been left out n prolly would've been a good idea..
i liked the bad post line i think that was the besat in the battle,i found it funny....not a bad drop...
xxx" you gotta concentrate more on your verse n punches/rhyme scheme this was'nt a very good verse...
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