Ma, you seem to be stuck on the self-glorification tip, but other than that your shit was straight. You gotta work on your structure too, but you'll get better with practice. I understand you're new to this, so just keep at it. Check out some of my posts and let me know what you think.
Admiration
Inevitable
Redemption
Thanks, 'preciate it.

Pending Battles:
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