This was a nice topical from both of you....Both used the topic well............
atticus:your verse was written very well, you had good flow, nice imagery, and in-depth descriptive writing, nice way to open this and create a scene,your creativity and original style showed here also, great job...................
shadow:nice verse as well,nice setup of scenery and good flow also, but i think this goes to atticus this time around, for an overall intense verse..............nice job both!!!
vote:atticus

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