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Old 08-06-04, 09:23 PM   #7
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Intensify had a good opener but that was about it... the flow started to stretch and the punches and personals...if any... were soft and played... a lil multi action going on but nothing that really impressed me...tempting and entry don't rhyme...

Manip...Nice first line but the second weakened it...punches were played but they made more sense and were better formulated than Intensify's. structure was better here... no multi's...

both need to work on wordplay and punches... personals, too.

Manipulation did enough to pull this one out... keep elevatin', y'all
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