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Old 08-06-04, 11:13 PM   #12
JaneDoe
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Originally Posted by raw killa

gave her my heart n love, gave me a kiss den turned round n gave my frend a hug,
to busy lookin at her dint look up, 2 weeks lata i found she and my frend fucked,
it was love i thought, we fought, so she sought, n wen she got caught, it was me n my 9 i brought,
we screamed she tried bein nice, i hit ha across da hed n den did it twice,
she cheated, i was mistreated, felt like i was defeated, so i was heated, so i shot her n den repeated, lets jus say our relationship then was deleted,


that is.... the words and how they rhymed but still fit in, was beautiful. i like this a lot.
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