Voted For: For$akeN
i was really feeling your verse forsaken i was surprised i didnt think you was this good in topicals...the vocab was sick good wordplay and structure everything was intact...and flowed together well...wasnt much imagery but everything else made up for it you wrote about the topic and didnt write a story for the topic thats what i like.....
claiph your structure was choppy flow was a lil off track but besides that you had a decent drop also you stayed on topic most of the way through...you more of wrote a story instead of describing hip hop
both verses were good but i gotta go with forsaken..good battle....caliph work on your structure and your topicals will be better
vote/ forsaken
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