Voted For: Ice Pick
ice pick dope ass verse...i was really feeling this sick multies good wordplay structure was choppy you need to work on that...punches was solid...but you need to use personals...cuz personals hold a verse together if barz had wrote a better verse and used some personals you could have lost so think about those...
barz: your verse was utterly wack no solid punches your structure was also choppy...you brung nothing to this battle and you need to elevate in all areas because your verse lacked in everything it wasnt consistent at all and the flow was off
vote/ ice pick
good verse from you both need to elevate
return the favor on this battle please
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