mATW
...structure is decent...flow trails off a bit...no multis...poor wordplay...none of ur punches connected...personals wern't good...

GangsStarShit
structure is good ..flowed well...wordplay is alright...some nice punches...personals were decent...no multies

Overall
Neither of you had multies but gangstarshit's was better structured and basically everything else was better...wordplay,flow,punches,personals....matw you should have more confidence, else what are ya doin on ths site?

Vote:Gangstarshit