p-dizzle..elevate a lil bit more mayn..i see u have great potential..heres wat u need to work on

Wordplay..try sum creative shit like

You claim your blessed lines are a-"head"..then i'll knoc you in ur holy "temple"

get it..and at the end of each line dont put / put .... or nothing.../ looks ugly....and vocab..try using big words.....u can try wat i jus told u in heer and if its dope u culd get in

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