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Old 08-07-04, 05:01 PM   #9
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Kid P-Dizzle wins this hands down cause first off,he had sum ok personals talking about planes and him comitting suicide witch was coo cause of TURBAN's name.Some of them were quiet weak and at times his structure made me wonder what was supposed to rhyme with what.But turbans,on the other hand was totally crappy,no hate man but if you use //'s in your verse try to make an aabb rhyming pattern.Those are the least confusing ones to use.Most of your disses were old such as calling him gay saying he plays with dicks..yeahyeah we know how it goes.Also,use WAY less self ups in your verse cause youre here to diss your opponent,not promote yourself.remember that.No real complexity in either verses but Kid P-dizzle had superiority in every category except self upping.

v/Kid P-Dizzle.
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