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Old 08-07-04, 06:32 PM   #11
~Luciano~
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bitch sume1 call 911
im bout kill her till she run run run
who callin me worthless , im bout to get ya toothless
gotta have sum teeth if ya fuckin with tha ruthless
i wont go to hard , shit y the fuck didn't any1 said i was fuckin with a retard
wtf she dunno where to start , another illegal & she bout to get her greencard
put her on the street , while suckin dick dont forget to breathe
holla back at her , next time she might swallow the seed
illegal teenagers , fuckin men for the minimum wages , prostitution she really gettin into
it fulltime
pay up the bitch after doin her thing she might drop a cheap freestyle
ya style is 2wack , better start get ya feet bac on the rite track
bitch tryin to rehab , after the course all ur clientele call u back
overall=50/100
kinda of a week drop ya structure was fucked and ya wordplay wasent there sum nice punches tho

you's not a ruthless killa you a worthless killa,you'ld never pull a trigga cos i c u as a fucking chica
you say you play streeball,when you aint even tall..and to conclude it all..you cant catch a ball
if this guy was a blunt, i swear he'd be consumed in a sec,he wouldnt pull a stunt..even if he practised for a month
your self-glorification..is enuff for u to goon resignation,cos u repeat the same things,son ur lacking immagination
you on RV is just like alice in wonderland,go play with ya barbie and ken,son this aint disney land
you taking the rap game for a circus,betta stay outta focus,if u wanna elevate keep writting in ya note books
this guys flows wouldnt flow faster,even if he learnt from twista,not even if he was SHUMACKER..
dude u still on the basics,you wunt show ur recs cos u degrading,i got 5 wins and elevting...
24 posts and still thinking to to be no joke,when you got choked by Marvolous and gave ur screen a stroke..
july 9th..the day you parents made the biggest mistake,if i was god i forgive them,cos i've made u iregular like C-flakes
overall=70/100
wasent the best drop but u had better punches and ya structure was fucked 2 but so was ya comps so it didnt matter
overall came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay
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