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Old 08-07-04, 08:26 PM   #27
~Luciano~
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Voted For: Ice Pick


I've got elevated standards mixed with an inclined rhymin' attack//
Battle in SUB ZERO temperatures to Yank the SPINE OUT YA BACK//
Have you lying out flat......Real emcees, are part of a dying breed.....
what you really need-to-do//
is stop gettin' your nuts pumped up when you're on weed and brew//
You're transparent, I can see through you....I'm known for wreckin//
Careers on the net...see me clear as a threat...catch shells from your own weapon//
Severely I'll wet.....your sweat suit, let loose, holes appear in your flesh//
A Fetish to fukk you up....chunk,a spear in your chest to leave you a mess//
I've been pushed to the edge, took a sledge,hammer to the roof of your head//
then split in three.....with the sharp wedge.......blade of an axe///
You write and recite,bullshit for free, while I get paid to spit facts//
I'm raping these tracks....feel like the BFI man, Taking out trash//
Fresh flavored, so I'm making it last....Chinese Issue A.K. sprayin' em fast//
No hesitation or delayin' on my part, just start, squeezing//
My A.K.'s got V.A. bleeding....you're lungs are opened so air's leaking//
Leading to having difficulty breathing.....seeing you gasping and weezing//
I ain't gonna just leave 'em.......Nobody knows where V.A. went//
Placement....body parts scattered about under the pavement//
Teeth and head elsewhere in a furnace getting cremated//
You can get away with murder....long as it's pre-meditated//
7/10


Investigate this kid, watch 'em elaborate with Lips.
Spit fire to this ice block, and watch me evaporate this Bitch.
Recap To Fake a Diss, just a simple Resolution...
Darwinism explains this coward, your Liquid, Guess whos Fusion?
Best at usin'...personals to dry up Reputations.
Loss of water supply, when you step to verbal Invasions.
Self reprisentation, get a medic...his sigs in Trouble.
Ill drain out your Purpose, like kids in puddles.
Fibs in Doubles, your at your Vertical Limit.
People wouldnt feel your flow, like humid days in a convertable Civic.
Addin foriegn liquid to this thread, might soften you Out.
Finish my lecture, and discipline this child...as im washin your Mouth.
6/10

this was a close battle but it came down 2 better wordplay
verbal u had perfect structure but ya punches werent hard at all

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