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Old 08-08-04, 12:47 AM   #25
Detrimental
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Voted For: Wicked One

Wicked One....you got my vote....your structure was decent but it stretched at parts of it and it hurt your verse....but you still took it cuz your punches hit this dude and like KO'ed him....lol....nice wordplay, mettas and VERY good vocab...nice opener and closer too

AKA your verse was a little weak but it was still decent...nice flow and everything....decent punches...but it was weak....need to get a better vocab....but this was an ok battle

Hit my battles up and Wicked One....you never polled on my one battle with Ruff Ruff Thug did you? if you did then ok...but return an honest vote
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