Voted For: calamity

SONIC

This dudes young and poor, Vegetables Is your only "Salary"
It's Sad to See, But every verse you write is a true "Calamity"
->>first line was hot after i got it...second line was weak...he predicted it in his verse

This is Higher than Music man, the Fire is Fusin
U're like a long distant runner in last place, u'r "Tired" of Loosin
->>not feelin this punch...just too much of a stretch

I'm Still Smart you're Still Dumb, you Still Lost, I Still Won
U couldn't even beat me in a battle me if u had a Real Gun
->>haha good punch

Just listen to me ya'll as I spit This Truth
Ya name was "Hoops" coz MC's rap circles around u In Booths
->>weak...

Wit Weaker Raps, U Peak where I Emmerge At
U'r So garbage that when yo tape plays, the Speaker Cracks
->>decent punch...weak rhyming brought it down

When I throw Acid, u can't fight Back wit Spit
Oh, did u tell them U'r addicted to "Crack".. Ass Crack That Is
->>hah i liked this punch

From these Lips I Bust the Sickest Stuff, U should be Givin Up
U'r "Record's" more fucked up than discs that Skip too Much
->>ehh...decent

My shit is Hot and Scorchin and I'm leavin you In Torment
I knock out teeth, have u wearing more wires than Informants
->>haha

This is the main fuckin reason that I kill Fags
Calamity's like Lesbian Studs, he'll never be a "Real Man"
->>no...

If u ain't prepared for battle, you really should Surrender Then
Or i'll just send you "home" faster than Rickey Henderson
->>home plate or back to the minors? either way pretty good closer



calamity

36-1, not ne more, cause im bout to leave ya record image buckled..
howbout you better high "TAIL" it SONIC, cos im introducin my KNUCKLES..
->>knuckles punches on him are like one more battle from played but you got in under the wire...decent opener

he prolly lookin for posts of me saying shit in an outdated place..
battling me aint safe like mouth washing with razor blades..
->>first line was mediocre but i liked the punch

im tellin you, honests my word, this cat really gets hurt with the verbs..
Im bout to leave him street smart, like i cracked his skull on the curb..
->>haha I was feelin this punch

Im bout to leave his verse broken, like i was attackin his limbs..
Iv seen better punchlines spawned from the back of my timbs..*
->>i didnt get this punch...it will probably be obvious when i see the star after i vote but i didnt understand it

like you that white chick kobe banged,you fightin wit false "blows"..
nigga got more name changes than peoples thoughts bout mikes nose..
->>haha nice

i've seen your material, its not cloth, its totally crap..
droppin ya lyrics like a turd in bathrooms,but the toilets just toss em back!..
->>hah pretty good punch

you prolly gonna throw a punch like "you drop real calamitys"..
blowing holes in ya verse, like i was yo simmity sam with this..
->>wouldnt have been funny except he did...cleo is that you? ehh second line was fillerish

this "sucker" cant "spit" at all... cos hes up performin fucks n fellatio..........
sonic aint tryna battle... all this bitch wanna do is increase his dick to but ratio.... ???
->>weak closer

This is one of those flip a coin type battles...very nice from both sides

Sonic you had like a nice...weak...nice...weak pattern thing going on in your verse. You had some creativity going on in there which was cool. Some of the filler in there dragged your verse down and overall just not enough of your punches connected for the win here

Calamity you had some funny shit in there and there were some holes but overall you edged him out..i like your style. Some of the wording couldve been better but I saw where you were going with all the punches except the one i said I didnt understand. closer fell off the map but it was pretty cool overall.

Nice verses from both sides here both of you keep up the good work.

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