Voted For: headgames

yeah I'm voting for head games

head...
you need to not stretch some of your lines like that... it really fucks with the flow... You didn't really have too many good punches cuz alot of your shit was played out a lil'... you need to try to rhyme all your lines cuz there were a few lines that didn't rhyme with anything...

Bang:
Uh... you need to come up with better punches... and you stretched about 3 lines there and that fucks with the flow. Your vocab was elementry, and your rhymes were too. You can elevate tho...

V/ Headgames

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