Voted For: MagiC

dreams somtimes you have them all the time/ (1)
i dream about me spittin out rhymes/(2)
4/10
everynight i turn on my light write down somethin/(3)
thought i was gonna win/(4)
3/10
my match with this other guy/(5)
but i tryed to see it in my dream/(6)
1/10 didnt rhyme
its probly just a theame to you/(7)
cuz you scream in yer bed but its just a tred/(8)
1/10 didnt rhyme
so dont you see its just a dream, dont think your gonna end up dead/(9)
so dont get scared cuz i try to be great, so i hope i win this next dabate/(10)
1/10 didnt rhyme

I don’t want to sleep, I’m afraid of my haunted past
Last thing I need is sleep,, I hope my body can last
5/10
Everybody dreams sometimes, I dream often about death
Left with pain and sorrow my thought often end with death
4/10
My eyes are starting sting my body cant handle the deprivation
My thought filled with pain I long for mind and body separation
6/10
The pain is my own doing, I didn’t mean to cause any pain
Them people that I killed, wasn’t me! My twisted minds to blame
5/10
The corpses are still in the corner, I feel the eyes glaring on my back
There is no way out, Tie rope around my neck and wait until it cracks
7/10


okay both good but it came down to creativity and which story is better


i think this is a topical about Dreams but i dont see it so im just taking a guess


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