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Old 08-08-04, 11:27 AM   #38
Dustin Dubree
You're Like Melon
 
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This was tight, nice imagery and flow. I know you can't really tell "flow" on text battles but it was there. The opener was tight, and you had a couple of quotables in there. Good structure also. Overall, this was dope. 8.5/10

caliph yours was very sloppy and had gay structure. Your lines were to stretched and was hard to follow along. You didnt have any good lines for my liking. Overall, I didnt like yours. 4/10

Peep mine in elevated.
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