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Old 08-08-04, 12:20 PM   #22
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sonic

This dudes young and poor, Vegetables Is your only "Salary"
It's Sad to See, But every verse you write is a true "Calamity"
decent start

This is Higher than Music man, the Fire is Fusin
U're like a long distant runner in last place, u'r "Tired" of Loosin
nice..

I'm Still Smart you're Still Dumb, you Still Lost, I Still Won
U couldn't even beat me in a battle me if u had a Real Gun
umm noting was hard hitting here.....

Just listen to me ya'll as I spit This Truth
Ya name was "Hoops" coz MC's rap circles around u In Booths
decent

Wit Weaker Raps, U Peak where I Emmerge At
U'r So garbage that when yo tape plays, the Speaker Cracks
preety decent.... but the flow was eeeh...

When I throw Acid, u can't fight Back wit Spit
Oh, did u tell them U'r addicted to "Crack"..
if u ment ass-crack good if u ment crack-drug its weak....

From these Lips I Bust the Sickest Stuff, U should be Givin Up
U'r "Record's" more fucked up than discs that Skip too Much
ok...

My shit is Hot and Scorchin and I'm leavin you In Torment
I knock out teeth, have u wearing more wires than Informants
this was decent but i herd that last line befor...

This is the main fuckin reason that I kill Fags
Calamity's like Lesbian Studs, he'll never be a "Real Man"
i like the 2ed line 1st was a weak set-up


If u ain't prepared for battle, you really should Surrender Then
Or i'll just send you "home" faster than Rickey Henderson
ok finish..

not a bad verse but i think ya punches kinda lacked a little bit but all around still good... 7.5

calamity


36-1, not ne more, cause im bout to leave ya record image buckled..
howbout you better high "TAIL" it SONIC, cos im introducin my KNUCKLES..
ha nice ,

he prolly lookin for posts of me saying shit in an outdated place..
battling me aint safe like mouth washing with razor blades..
decent

im tellin you, honests my word, this cat really gets hurt with the verbs..
Im bout to leave him street smart, like i cracked his skull on the curb..
preety good, but i herd that last line efor but still good

Im bout to leave his verse broken, like i was attackin his limbs..
Iv seen better punchlines spawned from the back of my timbs..*
preety good,

like you that white chick kobe banged,you fightin wit false "blows"..
nigga got more name changes than peoples thoughts bout mikes nose..
haha nice...

i've seen your material, its not cloth, its totally crap..
droppin ya lyrics like a turd in bathrooms,but the toilets just toss em back!..
preety good,

you prolly gonna throw a punch like "you drop real calamitys"..
blowing holes in ya verse, like i was yo simmity sam with this..
nope dont flow,

this "sucker" cant "spit" at all... cos hes up performin fucks n fellatio.......... sonic aint tryna battle... all this bitch wanna do is increase his dick to but ratio.... ???

good ending...

nice tight battle and all but i have to give this to calamity
he had better hard hitting punches and was more clver in hes verse.....

nice battle