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Originally Posted by SONIC
Voted For: J_Trooper
J-tooper gets this because of nice punches and great stucture mainly. a lot of the stuff that headgames said was basic, trooper came with some original stuff with better rhymes and set ups.. so you get my vote cuz..
keep it gangsta and return this wit a drop in mines cuz, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352
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I hate it when peeps do that, my explaination was coo enough, but J-trooper, i'm about to explain better, just tell strobe that i gave another explanation and to recount my vote..
Headgames
First Bar: Easy rhyme scheme and played punchline.. not inpressed
2nd: Again, punch was basic, dr. Suess rhymes.. Lube and Smooth..
easy to come up with
3rd.. whack.. no punch at all, whac wordplay..
4th. whack, no punchlines.. you barley insulted him..
5th.. the close was a mediocre punch, alright set up.. over all the verse gets 6/10.. you lacked in wordplay, punches and creativity..
Trooper:
1rst: Mediocre punch, nice flow and wording..
2nd:first line, coo diss for a set up for a nice punch
3rd. nice punchline about gift, i get it too..
4th: nice word play, good meta at the end..
5th: nice set up diss, you mensioned his name atleast, than you KOed him weith a punch..
overall 7.5/10
Trooper you won this with better wordplay, nice stucture and better disses,, headgames lacked in every department and you honestly won, so tell Strobe to recount my vote..
Do me a favor and return favor with a drop in my thread cuz, thanx, one.. heres the link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352