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Old 08-08-04, 01:58 PM   #24
Decree Wun
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Voted For: SONIC

sonic: damn this was a Hot verse from you..Sick structure every line was on point..your flow was decent..good wordplay i liked that opener it was real decent...didnt see too many personals but da punches were bangin hard...nice shit....ur vocab was decent..overall nice shit

calamity: u might of took this except u lacked structure flow and vocab..ur punches werte hittin hard...ur flow was alrighjt...ur personals..didnt see too many...vocab...didnt see alot either......wordplay..was there..it was nice...overall: this was a sick verse but u lost due to vocab structure and flow
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