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Old 08-08-04, 02:46 PM   #9
LaTiNKiTTeN
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It's a shame he's from calgary, cause he doesn't near drop flames...
This pre-teen battles more with his rappa then with his fuckin brain...
GAY

We all now his records full of herbs hoes and the wackest of cats...
Rv's for elevation, but right now your skillz r like ally mcbeil...
.................................................. ...........just a lean back...
WEAK
But I guess you're facing your fears, you're in the ring with me...
Don't expect a show though, his skills just too much of a liability...
NOTHIN THERE
it's pliable like cardboard, he has the heart of a dirty scavenger...
No guts no balls, in famous victory's he'll always be just a passenger...
HUH?
He loves the attention from rooks, don't come in a real ring again...
Cause you're just a weak kid, my vet rhymes hit hard
.................................................. ....like an attack by multiple men...
GAYYYYYYYYYYYY
You can't call your wack crew, if only you knew what you got into...
But you didn't and your fucked, cause no one else is here to help you...
JESUS






Aug 3rd 2004


Dear Diary,


I regret to inform you this will no doubt be my last entry,
I'ma be exposed tommorow, R.V's got me battle'n Da Vinci

Got no new conversation, been flip'n verse's like hot cakes
Way past contemplate'n....been pick'n hurse's for goodness sakes

I question, that maybe I could set-up-shop, up on another site
FUCK, WHO AM I FOOL'N?? That answer lies with this knife to my life,

For too long, I've hidden wack rhymes with a record, post count and a mod spot,
Try'n talk'n BIG to REAL vet's, who am I kidding...gotta boil my ink just ta drop hot,
THE ONLY PUNCH IN THIS ENTIRE BATTLE...STILL WACK

Like the Mona Lisa, Hobbes (avy) you'll only know the truth,
Can't shake these feelings for Calvin (or other boy's in there youth)

I got my dick saddled up, maybe..hopefully it can get some ride's,
I hope to god peep's got my p.m's and there not stuck offline,

And I picked up pennies all day to try and get some luck,
But it seem's peep's won't pay 2 cents for my thoughs any more,
.................................................. ......................I guess I"m fucked.
THIS WAS WORDED ALL WRONG.............U COULD'VE REWORDED THE FIRST LINE..TO SOMETHING BOUT HE ONLY GETS LUCKY WHEN HE FINDS A PENNY ...OR ANYTHING BUT WHAT U GOT NOW..............N CLOSER SHOULD'VE BEEN A SETUP.......................





COMMENTS......JPOLL,UR DROP WAS EXTREMELY WEAK.........THIS IS THE WORST I'VE SEEN FROM U.............N JUST WHEN I THOUGHT I'VE SEEN IT ALL....I SEE THIS GAYNESS,A FUCKIN DIARY VERSE IN A TOURNEY BATTLE BY DA VINCI

DA VINCI...LET ME SPEAK TO U FOR A SECOND.....WTF WERE U THINKIN SON,DONT EVER DO THAT AGAIN...THAT WAS FUCKIN GAY
maybe,just maybe had u not had that gay idea,u could have won this....WHAT IS THIS STAN BS,BOUT HIM HAVIN A KNIFE BY HIS SIDE???? GAYYYYYYYY..N TALKIN FROM HIS PERSPECTIVE? IN A BATTLE? THIS IS NOT A TOPICAL....I DUNNO IF U THOUGHT U WERE BEIN CREATIVE OR WHAT,BUT IT KILLED UR VERSE COMEPLETELY.....................
U KNOW,I THINK U WOULD HAVE WON.......CUZ JPOLL CAME EXTREMELY WACK....N U HAD SOME CONCEPTS THAT COULD HAVE BEEN WORKED WITH IN UR VERSE,N U HAD ONE PUNCH,NOT A HARD PUNCH,BUT AT LEAST U HAD ONE......BUT THAT DIARY SHIT JUST KILLED IT SO MUCH....THAT I HAVE TO GIVE THIS TO JPOLL MAN.......................................
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